We just started editing the script, and it’s going really well. The characters are becoming so much more vibrant and all the lose ends are starting to fit together really well! -Trie
Here’s a small snippet of what we’ve edited:
The prisoner is yours, Supreme Commander General.
SUPREME COMMANDER GENERAL
Excellent. Goodness, he looks awful. What’s wrong, Arrol Ontol?
Nothing. Leave me alone.
Don’t worry, I will. Eventually. But first of all, tell me what happened.
-From The Guardian Tree: Scene 1